Teach Yourself Japanese
Subject: Re: 俳句
Date: Fri, 12 Jun 2009 04:00:54 GMT
References: 1, 2
> > 早朝に
> > 鳴る小鳥たち
> > 眠れない
> The rhythm of 5-7-5 morae is okay.
> The verb for birds is 鳴く, not 鳴る. And you need a word that stands for a season, say, spring. Using 春の朝 instead of 早朝に is just fine.
Heh... that's a bit embarrassing (鳴る instead of 鳴く, that is). （汗）
Thanks for the corrections. I had thought it just had to be nature-related, not that it needed a seasonal word, but after I saw you write that I remember seeing 季語を含む in the definition, which is pretty explicit. 添削をありがとうございます！
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